From 64282ea0f39b1fc7b3057bf49288350dd5e88b84 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andreas Kempe <kempe@lysator.liu.se>
Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 12:15:05 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] =?UTF-8?q?Liten=20revidering=20av=20den=20engelska=20?=
 =?UTF-8?q?=C3=B6vers=C3=A4ttningen.?=
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Tack hx!
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 .../presentation/presentation_en.tex"         | 31 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git "a/infom\303\266te/presentation/presentation_en.tex" "b/infom\303\266te/presentation/presentation_en.tex"
index 4e6c8c4..50f989e 100644
--- "a/infom\303\266te/presentation/presentation_en.tex"
+++ "b/infom\303\266te/presentation/presentation_en.tex"
@@ -180,8 +180,9 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
 
 \begin{frame}{RydNet}
   RydNet was one of the first networks built in Europe of its kind. Construction
-  started in 1991 and in 1993 a radio link with a speed of 0.5 Mbit/s between
-  Ryd and the university. In the end of the ninties most of the students in Ryd
+  started in 1991 and in 1993 a radio link with a speed of 0.5 Mbit/s had been
+  created between Ryd and the university. In the end of the ninties most of the
+  students in Ryd
   had their connection via RydNet.
   \pause 
   Studentbostäder in Ryd later decided that the internet was more than a fad
@@ -201,7 +202,7 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
   $\sim$ is Lysator's room on campus \pause
   \begin{itemize}
   \item Comfortable workstations \pause
-  \item A small kitchen with a coffee machine, fridge, freezer and microwave oven.
+  \item A small kitchen with a coffee machine, fridge, freezer and microwave oven. \pause
   \item The most comfortable couch on campus.
   \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
@@ -220,14 +221,14 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
  \texttt{foo} is Lysator's server hall in the G building \pause
  \begin{itemize}
  \item A nice little server hall that has room for about ten server racks \pause
- \item Not open for ``regular'' users but you are free to tag along with a \texttt{root} heading there \pause
+ \item Not open for ``regular'' members but you are free to tag along with a \texttt{root} heading there \pause
  \item Shared with LiU's other computer society CTRL-C \pause
- \item Other societies are allowed to house their servers at Lysator (both physical servers and virtual ones) \pause
+ \item Other societies house their servers at Lysator (both physical servers and virtual ones) \pause
  \begin{itemize}
          \item MatNat, the Y section and Staben
          \item FIA, UF and Admittansen
          \item SOF, LiTHe Blås, LiSS, Holgerspexet and RAG
- \end{itemize}
+ \end{itemize} \pause
  \item foo has a 1 Gbit/s uplink to LiU's network
  \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
@@ -238,7 +239,7 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
     All members of Lysator get access to 
   \begin{itemize}
   \item An account for the workstations in \(\sim\) \pause
-  \item Storage space (A LOT!)
+  \item Storage space (A LOT!) \pause
   \item Space for a web page on Lysator's web
         (https://www.lysator.liu.se/\(\sim\)~\texttt{username}) \pause
   \item Mail-address (\texttt{användarnamn}@lysator.liu.se)
@@ -250,7 +251,7 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
   and comfortable chairs.
   \begin{itemize}
   \item The Workstations run Ubuntu 16.04 LTS \pause
-  \item Many different screen managers and desktops are available
+  \item Many different window managers and desktops are available \pause
   \item A lot of programmes for everything from software development to 3D modelling. \pause
   \item If something is missing a \texttt{root} can usually install it if requested. \pause
   \item Gigabit connection all the way from the workstations to SUNET.
@@ -271,7 +272,7 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
 
 \begin{frame}{Other servers}
   Lysator also has web servers, a mail server, an FTP server, a LysKOM server
-  and a virtualisation server.
+  and a virtualisation cluster.
 \end{frame}
 
 \begin{frame}{The Root group}
@@ -288,7 +289,7 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
   \begin{itemize}
   \item A wiki (in Swedish) \texttt{https://datorhandbok.lysator.liu.se} \pause
   \item Has documentation about Lysator's systems (in Swedish...)\pause
-  \item Lists of our systems and their addressses (in Swedish too :()\pause
+  \item Lists of our systems and their addressses (in Swedish too :( )\pause
   \item Help on how to create a web page and use one's email (Sorry!)
   \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
@@ -298,7 +299,7 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
 \begin{frame}{What is a project?}
   Most of Lysator's activities are \emph{projects}. \pause
   \begin{itemize}
-  \item ``The one that does decides'' \pause
+  \item ``Den som gör bestämmer!'' \pause
   \item Anyone can start their own project! \pause
   \item Projects of all scales and types have existed and do exist
   \end{itemize}
@@ -335,8 +336,8 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
           \item Warlight 2
           \item Go
           \item Ultimate Tic Tac Toe
-      \end{itemize}
-  \item Meshnet - LysNet
+      \end{itemize} \pause
+  \item LysNet - Meshnet \pause
   \item Hackatlon i början på december
   \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
@@ -372,10 +373,10 @@ pdfcreator = {Lysator}
     \begin{itemize}
     \item It is pretty cramped in \texttt{foo} so we enter 10 at a time. \pause
     \end{itemize}
-\item Efter the visit to \texttt{foo} there should be pizza in $\sim$ for everyone. 
+\item After the visit to \texttt{foo} there should be pizza in $\sim$ for everyone. 
     There should be at least half a pizza per person. \pause
     \item If you want to become a member you can speak to one of the roots in $\sim$
-        tasked with creating new members \pause
+        tasked with creating new users \pause
       \begin{itemize}
       \item The membership fee is 50 SEK. (Paid in cash or via the Plusgiro) \pause
       \item Think of a username, most of them are alright \pause
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